1. Hey Reagan and Rachel…. If you are reading this I apologize for posting this kinda late. Anyway, I don’t think that I have changed anything in paragraph since I talked to you guys except for I added in my “point to prove” now that we have a solid thesis. I still want to go over transitions to use so that we aren’t repeating each other. Oh ya!! I also added my conclusion that I kept ranting about on Friday.
2. I guess my only questions would be:
A. What transitions did you guys use?
And
B. Have you looked over the intro and conclusion and gotten any fantastic ideas??
This is Rachel- I am sorry for posting this really late! I used the transition words: Otherwise, Likewise, and indeed......but I am still working on fixing it up so it may change.... :) For the intro- We used deception 3 times so I was thinking we should use another word. I will look over the conclusion and think more about it. Thanks again!
ReplyDeleteOk thanks Rachel!! that will help. :)
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