The Never Ending 5 Part Paragraph

In my 5 part paragraph blog, I talked about overall class trend high and low qualities and my personal high and low qualities. The mistakes of my peers tended to involve excessive plot summary, broad theme statements, commentary and concrete details not relating to the main the theme trying to be proven, and concluding sentences not serving the intended purpose. My mistakes were: I had two CDs for my first point and I had redundant word choice. In writing this 5 part paragraph , I was sure to check my CDs and analyze my word choice along with making sure I did the same things I did well last time well again. I also made sure that I didn’t have plot summary although that was hard for I was writing about prose/poetry, made sure I had a narrow, specific, unique theme, made sure to have CMs and CDs that related to my theme and a good concluding sentence.