Saturday, February 26, 2011

What Am I Reading??

Hey everyone, when I was reading the first few chapters of Great Expectations by Charles Dickens, I came across this passage on page 48 in chapter five, "My convict looked round him for the first time, and saw me . . . I looked at him eagerly when he looked at me, and slightly moved my hands and shook my head. I had been waiting for him to see me, that I might try to assure him of my innocence. It was not at all expressed to me that he even comprehended my intention, for he gave me a look that I did not understand, and it all passed in a moment. But if he had looked at me for an hour or for a day, I could not have remembered his face ever afterwards as having been more attentive." I had to go back and read through it a few times and still couldn't completely grasp what it meant. I thought that this may be because it was close to midnight and my mind just wasn't working correctly, but going back over it now i still don't know what it means. I don't understand what actually happened in the scene and this whole passage seems to be muddled with parts that don't really seem to go with the rest.

I guess my question would be: What is happening in this scene? Is it literal or metaphoric? and What does the last sentance in particular have to do with the rest?

Please Help!!

Saturday, February 12, 2011

Group Essay Collaboration Thing

1. Hey Reagan and Rachel…. If you are reading this I apologize for posting this kinda late. Anyway, I don’t think that I have changed anything in paragraph since I talked to you guys except for I added in my “point to prove” now that we have a solid thesis. I still want to go over transitions to use so that we aren’t repeating each other. Oh ya!! I also added my conclusion that I kept ranting about on Friday.
2. I guess my only questions would be:
                A. What transitions did you guys use?
And
                B. Have you looked over the intro and conclusion and gotten any fantastic ideas??